Heavy on the the satire and sci-fi/fantasy, less so on the queer, which is good because its treated as commonplace in the book, which is as it should be. This manuscript draft has a great story line, lots of action and really great characters. It could use some more editing to shorten it, focus the satire so it's not trying to skewer everything and everyone, and remove some of the overly wordy similes. Glad I was given the opportunity to read it, and I did enjoy it.
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